Poem...Tell me what you think.

[Broken_Mind]

Can't think

Can't breathe

I'm drowning in the drama Iv created

I didn't mean to

Didn't think they'd care

And now I cry myself to sleep

Repeat the words they tell me

"You don't have to pay for happiness"

I clutch my wrist

"You don't have to be strong"

I wipe the tears off my face

I'm insane and they know it

I'm insane and I know it

I'm overdue and I know it

Iv been too happy

And I haven't paid for it

Iv taken all this happiness

And haven't given any blood

I know I need to pay the price

And then I know that I don't have to

"You don't have to pay for happiness"

But it's so natural

So normal

"You don't have to pay for happiness"

But I do... It's my punishment

Because I know that I don't deserve happiness…

"You don't have to be strong"

But I do because I have no one to lean on

"You don't have to be strong"

But I feel like I need to be, even though i don't want to be

And I'm so confused that I rip at my hair

And I cry my self into hysterics

And I cover my ears to drown out the words i know are true but can't abide by

The words get louder as I scream myself into insanity:

 

"You don't have to pay for happiness, you don't have to be strong"

 

Tell me what you think. And ou can add a poem of yours if you have any...

[under_the_pressure]

that poem was great. it described how i feel.

 

under*

[i_hate_the_world47]

wow amazing poem.I loved it.I would post one on here but i have some on enotalone if you wanna read them.

 

~meagan~

[unforgiven]

i loved that poem

 

unforgiven

[behind_these_eyes]

whoa that was really awesome. you're a great writer.