lostNheartbroken Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 In your eyes I see your soul I feel you I see our past I see our future I feel uneasy such eyes as yours you've turned your back to me you've left me here by myself, alone to dwell in the torment of my emotions the anguish of what will pass days lived, nights past without you but not without for I am haunted haunted by thoughts happy thoughts of you such great dreams many great times the best of times spent together never together again for you've moved on and left me here by myself, alone to dwell upon what I do not have what I'll never have your love in your eyes I feel complete I've lost myself for without you I am not hand in hand we lived my dream so simple as it was so temporary to hold you to look in your eyes and smile but no smile could express what I see in your eyes no words could express my love for it can't be written nor said for love is peace be with you as you find your place you fill your dreams which once was me but I've come and gone for you've moved on You've caged my heart and lost the key trapped me in lifelong anguish in the form of dreams that will never be My only hope that in another life I will find you first before anyone else and you will know me you will feel me and we will be and my soul will rest for we will be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 WOW That was a wonderful poem.It was very deep.I loved it.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 This poem was amazing. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lostNheartbroken Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Thanks for kind responses. It's the best way I can describe how I feel right now, over the past few days...it's building up more and more intensely and I'm completely heartbroken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unforgiven Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 let me frist start by tell you i loved it it was great and secondly you are not alone brother for hark i here the angel come it is the angel of friend ship coming to left you up . if you ever want to talk openly to someone that could be me i know the feels deep inside that screem out here i am come take , i know all to well at times . your friend if you should ever need one such as this unforgiven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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