dpressedone89 Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 someday we'll be together someday just me and you someday we'll be happy someday to good to be true someday we'll smile and laugh holding hands and love will take over will live together sun will soak the lands some days theres nothing left some nights i sit and cry but then i think of you a vision of you and i in my hand i hold yours into your eyes i stare softly on your lips i kiss showing you im really there the sun in the background a beautiful sunset and loving embrace a soft breeze in the ocean air your soft touch upon my face together always we shall be in your heart i always dwell one last kiss soft upon your neck actions tell, i love you more than words can tell im always here if you need me no matter what we go through he soft words spoken from i love you -stitches aka The Antihero i dont know why i felt like seeing a happy poem on here so i posted this. hmm, what do ya know another love poem, what do you people think?i wrote it for someone very special to me, any oppinions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
June4life Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 I believe your poem is AWESOME!! Great job!! I could picture everything going on in your poem due to your great use of imagery. Aww, it makes me think of my boyfriend!! ...and its nice to see a happy poem on here!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sisterlynch Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Very Good Work, Bud! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spencerbandit88 Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 hey dpressedone89 great job with the poem. spencerbandit88 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Another materpiece stitches.I loved it. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 very nice stitches!!! I love it! who is it for? im so glad you have someone to love in ur life i love you -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 25, 2004 Author Share Posted August 25, 2004 thank you everyone im glad you liked it happy poems put me in a good mood so im posting some lately and i love you too ness -stitches aka The Antihero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Great job. I think this poem is amazing. =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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