nothingontheinside Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 Hoer Auf Give me the strength to Give me the power to Give me the pain to STOP STOP JUST STOP Stop the pain Stop the hate Stop the bleeding Stop the… my LIFE Give me enough common sense to say NO Help me I'm numb Help me take a step back Help me help myself Stop the pain Stop the thoughts Stop the blade From cutting everyone up And pushing everyone I love away Make me stop Stop my fall No more bad habits No more addictions I bleed, I cry, I'm all alone All I want from you is a bandaid A kiss, a shoulder to lean on And most of all I'd like honest love To stop the hate And yet I'm still alone Pick me up I'm weak Just help me STOP If you love me No more bleeding No more bad thoughts No more drugs To kill the pain STOP ME BABY STOP STOP STOP STOP THE BLEEDING! STOP wow that kinda sucked... but whatever, post honest opinions, i wrote it at 300 in the AM cuz i was mad so its like i dont know just whatever... -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 Wow That poem was wonderful.I could relate so well its scary lol.I loved it ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 awesome poem, way to go, keep up the good work, i love you very much, all your writing inspires me, love, -stitches aka The antihero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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