dpressedone89 Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 feelings inside to hard to speak the pain inside me makes life seem bleek your words formed my razor i cut myself for you i bleed and die for you i dont want to make it through you did this to me you know that you did a thousand new scars for all the ones that i hid i hope your happy you drove me to tears i sink into my razor to guard against my fears this isnt even a poem i am seriously upset its basically just a vent i hope someone likes it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 that poem was great. or vent..whatever it was it was great. good job. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 i didnt like it....i loved it.vent or not the words were very well put together.i hope you feel better. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 hey i know some time i need to hear this it wasn't all that good sorry i know you can do alot better i just wasn't feeling it this time i agree with the other post it did how ever flow nicely . just think your hidding your pain even from your self in this one . sometimes i think its good to hear it sucked but thats just me love me or hate me its just me your friend hardcore 8) yhea i know im straigt up and yes i know i can't spell so i suck to but this isn't the end of the world . 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 STITCHES... you know I'm here for you always! you're my hero and do you know why? first of all cuz ur an awesome friend and cuz u can WRITE, you inspire me... hehe I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! HANG IN THERE if u need to talk u kno I'm always here. -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 23, 2004 Author Share Posted August 23, 2004 hey, well thanx for the feedback, hardcore, i know your right the poem wasnt that great i just needed to vent and instead of whining about it i wrote a not so good poem thanks for being honest, everyone else thanks for your replies also. i love you all -stitches aka The Antihero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 it just seemed like you were holding back on this one your friend hardcore 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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