dpressedone89 Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 in these hands in these hands i hold my cure i hold my razor i hold somethin pure not soaked in me and not peircing the skin in these hands i hold self control i hold it deep within i hold a part of me a part of who i was you all wonder why wonder what it does well in my mind i hold it so gently i trace upon my arm i show you why i hold it still i carve this, ' it does no harm' in these hands i hold my life my savior in these hands i hold my knife but i let it fall spinning to the floor you helped me when i was down but i dont need you anymore -stitches aka The Antihero oppinions please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 Deep poem.I loved it mostly b/c i could relate to the emotions so well.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 Very good poem. Keep it up. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 i loved it stitches. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 wow stitch... awesome you still have yet to not amaze me with one of ur poems! i love you -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Great poem. I really like it. Great job =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 that was really amazing! great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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