brtlangst Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 Soft and alluring Your touch couldn't be more...welcoming Keep me here, Begging for more Your kisses, A wet warmth I've longed to taste You've crept inside A broken part of me Gently scraping up the pieces Of a past long pushed aside Shattered and alone I sat inside the shell, Of a hollow being Too scared to reach out To feel a warm embrace You found me there, Lying prone to the world Trapt inside a cage Of the pain I could no longer stand to feel You approached me quietly, Reaching past the bars Your hand patiently waiting For a touch of compassion Reluctantly I grasped your hand, Afraid to be pushed away You smiled knowingly, As I gazed into your eyes You saw a resemblance long desired An understanding of the scars Held deep inside We sat there for awhile, Holding eachother's hand Silence sincere To our mutual understanding I reached inside my pocket, Feeling for a cold comfort Of the key I've long kept Buried deep inside To my surprise, I handed the key to you The key to the many locks and chains, Entwined around my heart shaped cage As I whispered slowly in your ear I think I'm falling for you... -Amie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chantel75 Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 WOW- you are only 15 and you can write like that ?? I am impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 i liked it very good keep it up ' 8) and no im not happy thanks for asking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 Amamzing,i loved that poem.You have a great writing style and very good rhythm. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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