ang3l2004 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Why dont you look into my eyes like you use to do, Is it because there is someone else out there for you? Why do you get so hot and so cold, Mean,nice,angry,sad and bold. Why is it that you are confused about me, When all along you said this is where you wanted to be. How can you just act like everything is ok, Stop calling then come over a week later and stay. Make up your mind because my heart is for you, I am sick of the games and getting sick of this to. You tell me you love me and I am in your heart, But if that was the case then why are we still apart? You kiss my lips and smile in my face, Tell me that noone will ever replace. You tell me I will marry you oneday down the road, But do you think that this is love that you have showed. I call you up everythings fine we smile, But it all changes back to anger after awhile. Either you love me and miss or you hate me and dont, When you call me I pick up the phone mabe now I wont. You say you care and you would always be here, But is that why im sitting here with a tear. I soon need to find out what I am going to do, So I can stop all this madness and stop being so blue. By me Tell me what you think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keep45 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Very nice poem. Very emotional too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanRockstar Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Great poem, heartfelt and it rhymes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 aww thankyou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 awesome poem, you put hard to define feelings into words, i admire your writing, very deep, very heartfelt, lots of feeling, great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lookingformyredangel Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 thats really good. nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 Wonderful poem.So much emotion.Full of once undescribable feelings. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 that poem was amazing. Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MGandV Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 Very well written. It shows just what you are truly feeling. No need for harsh words. Honest and humble. Loved it! MGandV Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 29, 2004 Author Share Posted August 29, 2004 thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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