tahlia Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 I wrote this poem when i was 14 and i still like it. I think it reflects the typical teenage angst felt at this age. Anyways, its a bit wordy and over the top but i found it recently and thought i;d share. Let me know what you think: Shadows My life is a world full of shadows, Darkess from which i can not hide, Self images of nothing Because nothing is what i am My life is a cloud of horror Meandering accross space Ever growing darker A dull and lifeless shape Yet where is the light? A glow of resplendance? Full of lustre and deep brilliance For light is the message from God.. My life is full of dismal obscurity, With a silent scent of evil, A mystical shutter of gloom, Which keeps out the light My life should be a vivid magnificance A dizzy spell of luminance But the mystical shutter is locked! And my life remains unlit forever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanRockstar Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Let's hope your talent hasn't faded now you're older, nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 amazing poem, i hope you havent stopped writing, you have natural talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 great poem.I hope you havent stopped writing. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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