writergurl Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Let me go, Set me free. Rip what is of me From your unmerciful, Ruthless heart. Cast me away, Like thin, dry chicken bones From which you have sucked the meat clean. Throw me out Like squalid rubbish, Moldy bread, Spoiled milk, Rotten eggs. Let me go, Before it is too late And I fall in love with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Wow,deep poe.I loved the way you expressed things.GOdd job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 That's a great poem. I really like it. Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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