poem please read and reply thanks

[ang3l2004]

There are so many reasons why I love you and you are my heart,

I know we are not together but I love you even though we are apart.

 

I remember the times we would hold hands and walk and talk all night,

I remember times you would drift away I would hold with all of my might.

 

I remember when you would hold me tight to tell me I will be fine,

I remember all the times you said that your heart would always be mine.

 

I remember our little arguments that always ended with a kiss,

all the small things are what I really do miss.

 

remember when you told me I was the girl you wanted to marry oneday,

I never did take that as a game but I guess you were ready to play.

 

I remember when you would rub my face and tell me goodnight,

Now you are not even next to me in bed you are no longer in sight.

 

I remember when you told me that the key to your heart was with me,

So why is it that you left me?Is this the way that it is going to be??

 

I love you and I miss you and I want you by me for good,

You tell me that you love me to but mabe you dont think you should?

 

You dont owe me anything yes I know that is true,

But I would like the truth or some type of hint or clue.

 

I close my eyes and think about you and all the things you say,

But then as I open them to look around you are not here today.

 

BY tell me what you think??

[rbelle]

Have'nt lost your touch.

 

Keep up the good work

 

If i may suggest...i think it would be much better if u will put titles in all your poems. What do u think?

[ang3l2004]

Aww thankyou

[Stinkweed]

I think this poem is really good. You're a very good writer. I like all of your poems. Great job =D>.

[writergurl]

Really enjoyed this one. Great job. thanks for sharing!

[i_hate_the_world47]

Such a moving poem.Its so well written and full of emotion.I love it.

 

~Meagan~