CamoMonkeys Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Yes, this is one of my favorite poems. Tell me what you think of it. The way to death is an open road No one leading, no one to be led Life is something we should all forebode Instead of the innocent tears we shed Hold gently the sound of my voice For the fragile instant of time will shatter All these dreams enough to hoist But all life will seize to matter Do not end this road of love The thread has not yet unraveled And send for the skies above No more to be hurt or baffled [edit] This is my poem. I wrote it [/edit] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 great poem, u have good taste, btw your a pretty new member so welcome to enotalone, i like ur sn ~words speak the mind, Poems speak the heart~ -stitches Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamoMonkeys Posted August 14, 2004 Author Share Posted August 14, 2004 great poem, u have good taste, btw your a pretty new member so welcome to enotalone, i like ur sn ~words speak the mind, Poems speak the heart~ -stitches =D Thankya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Great poem i really enjoyed it.It had a great flow and full of emotion to.Also welcome to enotalone ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetpea4670 Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Um...just curious, who wrote it? "seize to matter" should be "cease to matter". Seize means to grab suddenly and forcibly. Cease means to put an end to; discontinue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamoMonkeys Posted August 14, 2004 Author Share Posted August 14, 2004 Um...just curious, who wrote it? "seize to matter" should be "cease to matter". Seize means to grab suddenly and forcibly. Cease means to put an end to; discontinue. Oh, I wrote it. And I was wondering about that cease/seize thing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamoMonkeys Posted August 14, 2004 Author Share Posted August 14, 2004 Sorry I didn't mention this earlier. It is my poem. I wrote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Hi. It's a very good poem. I really like all the deep emotions expressed. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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