Gnosis Posted May 28, 2011 Share Posted May 28, 2011 This is a poem I have recently written. I'd much appreciate any feedback positive or negative. Thanks in advance. The apple of my eye Does not compare to thee The most beautiful words Can't comprehend her soul As to unite with her Is being united with the divine Aslong as she breathes My heart beats Aslong as she sings My heart dances Though we haven't known eachother long Space and time are not a barriers to which we belong For my love for her is what holds the universe in place Even if we were to part, She'd always have my heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EternalDreamer Posted June 10, 2011 Share Posted June 10, 2011 Absolutely beautiful, thank you for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beoslasher Posted June 19, 2011 Share Posted June 19, 2011 Sounds like the truest love! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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