behind_these_eyes Posted August 12, 2004 Share Posted August 12, 2004 She climbed. It was high up and it was far down, But she climbed. She pulled herself upward through the maze of branches, Settling on the highest one In the tallest tree. She sighed. Gazing at the sorrow below, She laughed- For the first time in a long time. She slowly shut her eyes, felt her support begin to shatter. Nature's cradle was releasing her, But she wasn't holding on. She fell. It was high up and it was far down. But she fell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 12, 2004 Share Posted August 12, 2004 That was a great poem.I liked the way it flowed.Keep up the writing. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 12, 2004 Share Posted August 12, 2004 i like it. i like the repitition and the way it flowed. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted August 12, 2004 Share Posted August 12, 2004 excellent. At first I was like ooh a kids poem... then it took me in. Awsome love it! ForAnother (POST 300!!!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 unbelievable, you are very gifted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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