bruind Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 i hate it when u make my tears fall from my eyes, yet i love you, for in my eyes you paint a smile. i hate it when you make me feel like a caged bird, yet i love you for the security your arms can give. i hate it how you make my anger melt, yet i love it when you turn my fears away. i hate your uncontrollabe bursts of anger, yet i love your intoxicating sweetness. i hate it when girls approach you, it makes me so insane, yet i love how you make me feel beautiful despite my flaws. i hate the thought that i always place second to your family, yet i love it too cause i know you'll be a good family man someday. i hate it when you cuss in the midst of a fight, yet i love it when you whisper sweet nothings unto my ears. i hate the idea of falling head over heels for you cause i know i'd get hurt, yet i love it too cause you make me float to high heavens. i hate you for effortlessly making me fall hard for you, yet i love you cause you make it all so easy for me. there are some things that i tend to hate about you, yet all those seems to evaporate in to thin air, cause all i see is the beauty in you... thats how much i love you... what do you think of my second poem? Hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephiepoo Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Hey! I really enjoyed your poem, i liked how you compared everything..i hate but i love...its like saying how i dont like this or that, but i love this or that, it makes up for the thing you hate...but i hope that makes sense heheh..but yah very nice poem! keep it up! stephiepoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 It's really good. I think you've got talents. Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bruind Posted August 11, 2004 Author Share Posted August 11, 2004 hi steph & dead eyes. thanks for appreciating my poem. yeah, i tend to hate some things about him, yet despite all those, the love i feel for him is more important. despite his flaws Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 st*r That was an amazing poem.it was filled with emotion.I can relate to y0ur situation and all i can say is stay away from guys like that. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bruind Posted August 12, 2004 Author Share Posted August 12, 2004 should i? despite his flaws, he still have good things too. far more than the bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 great poem, dont saty away from guys like that if you love him enough so that he ionspired such a beautiful poem, thats true love. keep writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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