ang3l2004 Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 What if I told you I love you would you even care? What if I said I needed you would you even be there? What if I would leave and go far away? Would you come and look for me and ask for me to stay? What if I said I miss you so much and miss you being around? Would you come and hold me catch my tears before they hit the ground? What if I told you I cant speak to you because it is to hard for me? Then would you open up your heart and open your eyes to see? What if I told you I want you back because you are my heart? Then would you come to me instead of being apart? What if I told you I am done with you and sick of all this mess? Would you love me even more or would you love me less? What if someone asked me out and I looked at them and said no? Would you be more happy if you did or didn't know? What if I asked you to tell me the truth instead of telling me a lie? Would you be honest with me even if it ended with a cry? What if I told you im confused like you but still know where I want to be? What if I told you from the bottom of my heart I love you this is just me? Tell me what you think??By me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 ok no joke this poem made me teary eyed.Your poetry i written so well with so much emotion.i wish i was half the poet you are. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rbelle Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 I have read all the poems you post here, and everytime i read your poems, u make me cry a bit, it touches my heart. Keep up the good work!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 11, 2004 Author Share Posted August 11, 2004 Wow I did not realize it made people teary eyed and thankyou so much for your comments they are so nice,It makes me feel good to know that people like my poems,I do them to express how I feel or when I am down and sad or even just thinking I post a poem,Sometimes I do it just because I feel like it,I think it is a great way to help stress and sometimes help you sort out your problems and it can also be fun to write poems,I just love doing it,I hope everyone enjoys them and can understand them but the way I feel you will always find in my poetry once again thanks so much for reading and replying to all who have done so to all of my poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ravens_eternity Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 i make poem evertime my heart is broken i have seen other poem form other ppl but i can tell your vary good at it o and about your poem if you where my X and she said waht your poem said the ansers would me yes too all o i have lots of poem if you want to see some my E mail is email removed it would be the frist time anyone have seen them but me. but i think it's time to show how i feel thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Great poem. Your writing never ceases to impress me. You're a natural. I really like you use of rhythm in every poem. It's so full of strong feelings... Great work =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 14, 2004 Author Share Posted August 14, 2004 wow thanks again all of you for being so kind to read and reply to my poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizzle Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 i love your pems they have a great way to make me fel relaxed for some reason, keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
writergurl Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Excellent poem. I loved it, very well written. My favorite line is "Would you come and hold me catch my tears before they hit the ground? " Doesn't everyone want someone who would do that, feel that way about them? I know I do. Thanks for sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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