hardcore Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 my life the way i see is nothing more then a pea. long have i waited for the day to stand and say i a'm done and i have nothing else to say ' but whow is me for you see this life go's on so here i am just one alone laying on the ground feeling so cold looking up at the clouds with a smile people running around 'saying don't go' but then i think to myself as i beging to let go im just going home. as i make my gasp i am released into the forevernigth long have i waited for the day to come the day i died on the front lawn.cry not for me for i am done 'done with the pain of life but instead wheap for your self the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Don't give up, your life isn't a pea. I don't know if it's a poem you wrote to illustate a feeling, or if it's what you actually feel like all the time. All I can say is that you shouldn't hurt yourself, I don't really know what else to say. That's really deep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Life will always have it's up and downs. Thank heavens downs are not forever, but unfortunately ups aren't either... So, I just wish you make the right decisions. Good luck and best wishes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 That was a wonderful poem.reat job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted August 14, 2004 Author Share Posted August 14, 2004 thanks i think i need to get help or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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