dpressedone89 Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 the sound of a breaking mirror echoes eternaly in the background in the chaos of a normal day this has become a soothing sound looking down into the shreds of it staring at your broken reflection like a shadow on the sun you are the flaw in perfection staring into infinity slashes of the peace on my wrist dreaming of the perfect place but such a place does not exist into your face you look into your own eyes you stare into your wrist you cut into your grave this secret you bare no one will ever know from where these scars came and to the unseen in compare the revealed seem tame my mind fills with these thoughts my hands bleed this pain but to you these are just words you think that im still sane so i say goodbye never to be heard from again because im dying now not by the mirror but by the guilt within -sTiTcHeS aka The Antihero oppinions please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 i think it is one of your best writings. i love it. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 Great poem, keep writing. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 hat was the best poem i have heard.It was full of emotion and thoughts.Great work. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtastic Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 Great poem dpressedone89, I like you're poetry on the whole, but this one is a stand out. Very emotional. Keep it up. mtastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 Great poem. I really like your writting. You're very good in communicating feelings. Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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