fallingisfun Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Electric pulses Lightening bolts Atoms spinning Aimlessly, Hop, jump, twist Like fireworks Exploding Millions of colorful Ions work so hard To keep my physics In tact, In fact Even my blanket Is anxious Sending messages Retrieve, release Impulses, convulsing so methodical so harmonious Destructive with instruction Memory banks Flooded with worry Regret, hurrying To get to the Bottom or top of it And all I'm doing is Trying to get some sleep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 That's a great poem. It's all true, you know... I like how you used what goes on as you are sleeping for a poem. It's a cool poem. Good job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 That was an amazing poem.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thanks everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duderanomi Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Stylin'! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 WOW that was a cool poem! A really good read and I enjoyed it keep up the good work. Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thanks hubman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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