i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 I gave you my heart and soul I gave you my body as well Who would have known that all this love Sent me to a fiery hell Sweet red lies poor from your lips And my foolish self believed them While my heart told me to go You silly fool just leave him I listened not to my heart Niether to my mind I just fell harder for you boy The truth would not be kind My body was yours to have I gave myself to you i thought my body was all you wanted And soon found it was true Now i lay here torn and heartless Feeling dirty and cheap I thought we would last forever Thought your love was something i could keep But all the love was just a lie You just led me on Our whole love was just a myth A terrible bad song Comments are greatly appreciated. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 That was a very strong and deep poem. I liked it, full of emotions. I hope you get better. And I'm sorry to hear about your situation. hugs* under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComputerGuy Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Nice poem, it's really well written and I hope you feel better soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 thanx guys. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 I think your poem was amazing. It's really personal... It's got very deep feelings that could only come from the depths of your heart. I like really your poems, because they have those kinds of feelings... Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_magic Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Hey i really liked you poem, like dead eyes writ, your write really personal and i think that way your open and honest, i liked your poem even though i felt sorry for the content, i had a friend use me once and i felt the same way you writ, so i hope everything works out for you! black magic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 i would say to you i loved your poem very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 11, 2004 Author Share Posted August 11, 2004 Thanx for all the positive comments guys ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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