ang3l2004 Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 I put my head down slowly close my eyes, About to find out the truth from the lies. You finally tell me how you truly feel, But is this happening is this real? I begin to cry as I look at you, My face turns red I become blue. You tell me you love me tears hit the ground, The room starts to spin and I hear this awful sound. I look at you and I just want to say, That I cannot handle this not today. You are my heart my soul my all, I just sit there and stare at the wall. I become angry and mad in my heart, But I dont care I still dont want us apart. You tell me you do not want to see me cry, I told you that I would like to die. Mabe you are finally opening up your eyes, Mabe it's true mabe you do realize. Just dont forget me or what we had, While I sit here and listen to all of this sad. I am glad you were honest but I dont now how to take, I will love you forever but I hope this is not a mistake. Quick poem tell me what you think?? thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Hey, I think it's really great. I love your use of rhythm. Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 I like you poem. I hope you recover from your pain. hugs* under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComputerGuy Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 I liked that poem, hope everytrhing gets better for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thankyou all so much for your nice comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 You are having a rough time to I guess it really sucks to deal with this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 OMG Ang3l!!! What an emotionally charged peom and another masterpiece. I hope all is well with you tonight. Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Great poem.I hope you get through this pain your feeling. ~mEAGAN~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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