dpressedone89 Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 I'll draw you a picture of blood sweat and tears a picture of my pain on my arm i've ben drawing for years can you see it in my eyes how about my arm why break this habit it does you no harm you dont see my pain so you assume it doesnt exist you dont see it in my eyes so i draw it on my wrist -sTiTcHeS what do ya'll think of this one? -sTiTcHeS ok i am feeling better what do ya'll think of that one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rage Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 I really like the poem, especially the first paragraph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 i love you Stitches!!! that was awesome. you are my hero... thanks for still being alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 Awesome poem.You will be a great poet some day. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_magic Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 I really liked your poem, i thought it was creative and i thought you used a good message and imagery to put your point accross, great poem though! black magic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComputerGuy Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 That was a real good poem, it was written really well and gets the message you're trying to say accross effectively. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
just_smile Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 hey i really liked your poem, i agree with Rage, i thought the first stanza was really great, but i also like the very last stanza too, i think you portayed simply how ignorant people are towards others pain. ~LJ =; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 That's really good. You're a very good writer. Great job =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 Wow, that poem was great. Very nice job! hugs* *under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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