loveyounomatterwhat Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 All these feelings all this pain, always walking around like there is nothing to gain. Why cant i feel it and be there like you, im alone and there is nothing you can do. Im lost and dying, but i aint crying. Because im sick of this mess, im living less and less. When im angry inside i put up a fight, and you calm me down and hold me tight. You say whats your problem?i reply cant you see, i cant help it, this is me. Im more alone each and every day cuz thats how i think i'll get attention, but from all of this i see i'll never be mentioned. Some people thought i just needed time away, and everything would be okay. But what i really wanted and really needed was someone, who was there for me through everything. I wish everyone knew how hard it is to go through this, all i wanted to feel was, that i was missed. All i needed was a smile or two, a pat on the shoulder and a hug from you. Im all better now with the help of all of you who cared, and now I say thank you to all of whom dared. _____________________________________________________________ Iam very new to writing poems so please just tell me the truth about this one because i wrote it about what happened in my life 3 months ago so please just be honest Thank you and LOveyounomatterwhat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 Great poem. It's really good. You're a very good writer. Good job. =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 that was a god poem.It had great rhythm. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 good poem i wish i could get mine as good but alass no luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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