fallingisfun Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 Factual falsities and truth misconstrued The needy get greedy, the smart get confused Sins are forgiven to be done once more Waves of impatience crash into lusts' shore Hearing and feeling, the smell of the past Wonder and yearning, time trickles so fast Climbing mountains and falling from crags Empty souls fill our cumbersome bags Heaven's gates guide you to hell's inferno War and death is a reality Earth show Grow to shrink, and be one with the ground Yelling to fight contradicting sounds Conquer the universe, complicate Earth Living to die, dying to give birth Sudden and slow, the wheels get turned Freezing, so cold that it creates a burn Time is forsaken, greed comes for free Lives get taken, from seed comes a tree Lovers get lost, storms violently rage Hatred corrupts, here on Earth's stage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 That's an excellent poem, plus everything you say is so true... Keep up the good work =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 I have to agree with dead eyes on this one it really was an excellance, be proud because i dont often use the word excellant, but i deffinitley liked it, i thought you were true with you words, and i think sometimes people forget the trate of actually being realistic, im glad you shared this one with us!! Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 That was a great poem.I have read some of your poems and your a good poet.Keep it up. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thanks everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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