SHaTTeReDSouL Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 distorted image My body's a canvas The blade my brush Spreading the paint Underneath my touch Small tears of blood Caress my skin Leaving a scar Of where they've been Painting an image In crimson red Releasing the pain All emotion is shed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 That's really good. It compares cutting to art... Even though I'm against cutting, I think your poem is good. Keep up the good work =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaTTeReDSouL Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 thanks i really appreciate all the positive remarks i've been getting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_magic Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 hey, i really liked your poetry, i can relate through the aspect of emotions being shed but i dont actually self harm, personally i have once had to deal with the issue of suicide and such thoughts. i liked your poetry mainly because its honest and realistic in views, i enjoyed reading it. black magic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 Wow I loved your poem.I could really relate to it also.Kee it up. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 i love it, and i can relate to it. EmptySoul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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