neva_black_n_white Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 hey everyone, this is pretty much a freestule and the list could go on, but this is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend but in short hand. ********************* Dave: did u no... every time you touch me every time you smile every time you run your fingers through my hair or reach for the dile every time you take me - for one of those walks every time we get caught up, in one of our personal talks every time you make me laugh every time you cry every time you tell me that im only ''your'' special guy every time you wake up and i see you in my arms every time u impress me with your natural charms every time you moonwalk every time you sing every time you do something that make my heart ring every time you play a song play it just for me, every time you do something that allows me to see every time you open up every time you back away every time we get caught up...usually in the rain every time you knock at the door every time i see no flaw everything about you makes me realise what this loves for.. every time you talk to me about what lies ahead every time your body speaks yet nothings been said every time you tell me what will be is every time i see something more between you and me this list could continue but what is to gain? love is not spoken through words but everything you do this poems now written as a note from me to you .... i love you i dont know guys, something that kind of scares me through realisation but makes me smile with hope, i hope some others know the feeling Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Hey Kel, Dave is one lucky man. I know I would be flattered by your poetry if it were written for me. It has a nice flow to it and everyone can see that your crazy about this man!!! Way to go you lucky devil!!! Keep up the great poetry my dear! Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 5, 2004 Author Share Posted August 5, 2004 Thanks hubman, id like to say i hope he knows that hes lucky but he always says he has so i guess i have to trust him on this one Seriously though, its like when he says that im now a part of his heart i actually think that he is exactly that to me, i usually try to deny my feelings but why try to deny something thats just perfect for me? Thanks again. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 That was an amazing poem, very sweet. He is really lucky. Keep writing, that was beautiful. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComputerGuy Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Wow, that's a beautiful poem. He definitely is one lucky guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Beautiful poem. It really is more than great. You should show it to Dave. Keep up the good work =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 Hey everyone, i really appreciate what you all say, and he is certainly a great person, i dont know if i would be able to give it to him, mainly because i wouldnt know how to approach it so that i and him felt right, i dont know, ill work this one out. Thankyou though for all the nice comments! Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 Dave is a lucky man.That was a great poem. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 7, 2004 Author Share Posted August 7, 2004 Thanks meagan im glad you like it, weve been having a tad bit of troubl in our relationship so maybe if i give this to him he will know exactly how i feel, thanks everyone! Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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