fallingisfun Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Miss "Color Me Happy" lass I know you know her too Life is a palette of mixed colors She's the canvas for me and you Plastered smile on the face It may smear but will not die Expelling gleeful ambiance Straight from her eyes to mine No matter what is going on Abhorring life or just a day She waves her magic wand And dismisses all unneeded pain She is the fairy tale mother With eyes that glisten in the night The goddess of the calming touch Making even death seem alright Miss "Color Me Happy" lass Dwells in the strangest lairs In the line at the post office Or the barber who does your hair You may see her on the highway Or waltzing slowly along the beach She might be living in your home Waiting to love, heal and teach Be careful you don't miss her Sometimes her grace is slight and slim Don't be so grumpy you don't see Or you'll remain amongst the grim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Interesting. I like the idea. Great choice of words. Doesn't touch me emotionally (nor should it have to) so it is harder to connect with. But I think it hits something interesting within me. Good job ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 5, 2004 Author Share Posted August 5, 2004 Thanks. Actually, I just wrote it because the other day I was feeling really down and I saw this girl at Walgreens, she just smiled at me and everything felt better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 That was a nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duderanomi Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Really cool poem. Cheer up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 5, 2004 Author Share Posted August 5, 2004 Thanks everybody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 I loved that poem. I had that happen to me before, I see someone and they smile just the right time and way and my day is better. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 5, 2004 Author Share Posted August 5, 2004 Thanks under, and everyone else who posted, thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 It's a great poem... Life would be so much better if everyone could be like her... Anyway, great poem. =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 thanks everyone, again! Wow, that made me feel good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 You have a way with words.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 i like it, nice choice of words. talented. EmptySoul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 Thanks everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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