ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Angels watch over us in everyway, They are there at night and the day. I sit in my room so silent and alone, Angels are there even when noones home. They are not seen but you know they are there, You can feel there presense and know they care. So if you have fear or tears in your eyes, The angels will be there they hear your cries. Always believe they are here to protect you, The angels are here to help us for whatever we go through. tell me whatcha think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I liked this poem very much Ang3l. It hints of not being alone when you really are. It speaks volumes my dear and hang in there things do get better. Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meow18 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 This is a neat poem. I espeically liked this part: "So if you have fear or tears in your eyes, The angels will be there they hear your cries." I like the whole poem, but thats definantly my favorite line. It helps you realize that you are never alone, even when you think you are. Thanks for sharing, it's a good poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 Thankyou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 It's a great poem. It not only shows us feelings and emotions, but also faith, which is something I've always lacked. It's very good indeed. Keep up the good work =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarterJonas Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 You have really got the knack of writing good poems. I also like this one, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I really liked your poem, its pretty nice mainly because i find myself a non believer but i like to believe there is something and i guess if you put something like that in a presense its pretty nice. i dont know, just a feeling. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I loved this poem the most out of all the ones i have read.It was full of sincerity and emotion.You are going to be a famous writwer some day. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 wow thankyou all so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 That poem was beautiful. It really made me think, even when I think I am totally alone, I'm not. 2 thumbs up! under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave The Fave Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Thats a beautiful poem! You can really sit and think about it. Dave 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 5, 2004 Author Share Posted August 5, 2004 thanks alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 A really heartfelt poem, you have written down everything i believe in, I have recently bought a figure of a guardian angel, I feel she watches over me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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