i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 A deadly dream Self inflicted pain on a young girl's wrist Hands clenched tightly into a bloody fist Another fight with father another beaten teen Her father's pain stays locked inside but still it is seen On her wrists her arms and chest For when it comes to pain she's best Knifes and razors scissors to Any thing sharp will have to do The blades are cool against her skin Letting out the pain within Bleeding away to a dark blur It was to late now no one could save her Hearts are broken snapped in to Yet she walks around like me and you No signs of darkness no signs of hate Those feelings sit inside and wait The wait is over the day has come For her and death to become one The blade hits skin just one more time Taking this young life of mine I smile happy and cry a tear For i have shed away my fears These vision,oh how real they seem But i awake sadly from my happy dream Any comments are appreciated. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mahlina Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Deep poem Meagan. You really did a good job in capturing the essense of pain. I truly wish you all the best in your life. I also hope that you don't resort to cutting again, because it will only leave permanant scars that will only be a reminder of your past. I know how your pain feels. Hang in there girl. You will pull though. I have faith in you. Take care. -Mahlina Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 Thanx Mahlina ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 Excellent poem =D>. You're very talented in expressing deep feelings, because I know exactly how you feel... Like mahlina, I hope you stop cutting. Best wishes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 that poem it was great. i have those dreams too and i wish they'd come true. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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