ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 My heart is bleeding my soul is on fire, Holding you is my inner most desire. The flame from this spark cannot be put out, Water from the eyes filled with so much doubt. Broken wings spread I try to fly, Looking up to the stars head down I cry. Broken heart betrayal no more lies, No more pain flowing no more cries. Ignorance hatred being mean to me, Running fleeing leave me alone to see. Hurt and in tears soul burning inside, Feeling empty helpless have I died. Praying hoping wishing you here, Waiting coping sitting around another year. Angels watch over me someone help me through, Nothing helps this endless pain what can I do? Arms are open my heart is still your heart, I feel so betrayed empty worthless not smart. Love me hold me kiss my lips with pride, Here there everywhere but not by my side. You come you stay you leave once again, Then all these feelings come back then. Stop it please stop this I cant take it anymore, Please respect me and if you love me dont pretend im a chore. If you dont love me please make sure you say, Let me find happiness let me find my way. Please stop the yelling please stop the lies, Please stop this pain and stop the cries. Please love me and hold me and kiss me so true, Please act like yourself please be you. Come back to life bring me above this dark deep pit, Heal my heart because it is so split. I love you I need you I miss you so bad, Is there anyway in life to feel other then sad? Somebody listen to me is anyone out there? Someone please tell me does he really care? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 that poem is very full of emotions. very good, keep it up! under Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 That was a wonderful poem.It ws full of emotion and i could relate to it well.Keep up the good work. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meow18 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 ang3l2004, I must say that your poems are seriously some of the best I have ever read. They are so well written & so creative, its amazing. Please keep sharing, I love reading them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 Thankyou so much! You all are very awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Great poem. It invokes so many emotions... Congratulations. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 What a wonderful poem by a talented person. I wish there was a way to help you with the pain your experiencing but, only time will do that. You really should look into publishing some of your work. Its really awesome and I enjoy reading your work. It give me insight into what feelings your dealing with. Keep writing... =D> BRAVO Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 thankyou!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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