EmptySoul Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 i am meant to be alone alone but with her by my side we have something that even i do not understand but i know nothing can compare to what we share with the silent words we say i love your laugh and your body your words and our memories but these feelings are like a responsibility- they're too heavy for me to bear i know you're like me in your soul i can feel it in everything you are and i'm sorry to push you away like all the ones before i'm sorry i can't stand to feel anymore and i hope on that last day you'll let me come say goodbye i know i'll want to see you one last time somehow you're everything i could be if i was meant to be "happy". what i really meant to say is i'm sorry for the way i am... i never meant to be so cold. i'll remember my love for you in my love for her... EmptySoul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 Empty-I love that poem. It's amazing, maybe it's just because I'm the 'her' in it and I know the 'him' Maybe it's because I understand it and I'm right beside you for everything. I love you forever. i'll remember my love for you in my love for her... thanks, thats sweet and means alot to me. xoxo *under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 Its good. I like the third stanza to the bottom the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 i liked your poem, mainly because im pretty sure if not certain that i can pull so many meanings out of what youve written, i enjoy reading your poetry and i think its great how open everything is. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I loved this poem just like all the rest of your poetry.You always have so much meaning in your poetry.Keep up the good work. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 very sweet very nice, 3rd stanza down is best like the other person said ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Great poem. It's so full of feelings and emotions. It's really great =D>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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