dpressedone89 Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 can you not see that i am in pain? are my screams to you all in vein? do you not see what i do or notice the harm? must i break down and cry, or wear it on my arm? is it beyond what words can explain? is it more that you want to hear? are you going to let me fall? do you ignore this out of fear? scattered stained razorblades lay on my bed and yet you say nothing you watched me as i bled ive even told you in spoken word the part about suicide and self harm must have gone unheard should i quit and say goodbye? or keep trying?i will carry on my own i will fight this i will break the habit and kill the pain all alone. oppinions?very very emotional when i wrote this. any feedback welcome -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 that is a very emotional poem but it was a good one. you know i'm here for you...always. under Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 That was an amazingly deep poem.You are such a good poet.Keep up the good work. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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