neva_black_n_white Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 I love you I hate you What more can i say? The way i feel for you grows each day But why do i want you? What do i fear? My body repels as you come near I love, i feel, long and desire But for me i believe these emotions are on hire To take them away My body'd decay A love lost within a second of a day! kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 Hey Kel, I really liked your poem. Good Job!!! Keep writing!! -Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 Yet another masterpiece.Your such a good poet.Keep up the good work. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 nice poem!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lamode Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 nice poem neva_black_n_white - can u know how old are u ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 Good poem! Under Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 2, 2004 Author Share Posted August 2, 2004 Thanks everyone for the great responce, much appreciated and well thanks i guess..its nice to see that people are actually reading and understanding what ive put. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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