jessijess Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 As the sunlight sparkles in Casting away my shadows And my dreams That glowing ball from the heavens Sending out warmth and security Providing life for all in Earth Existing since the beginning of time Seeing all good, all evil Knowing what no one else knows Seeing what no one else sees Forever in the sky For when it ceases We too will cease to exist I wrote that over 10 years ago! Any feedback is welcome...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 31, 2004 Share Posted July 31, 2004 That was a wonderful poem.Keep writing you have talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnLeFou Posted July 31, 2004 Share Posted July 31, 2004 Lovely! "If atfirst you don't succeed, write write again." you suceeded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnLeFou Posted July 31, 2004 Share Posted July 31, 2004 Lovely! "If atfirst you don't succeed, write write again." you suceeded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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