i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Why must life twist fate this way I should have died but yet i stay While my friend took her own life Took it with a bloody knife Why must pain run this teens mind Why must this teen feel left behind Why must she want to die so bad Yet all this thoughts are caused by dad Why does she cry crimson tears Why does she have so many fears Fears that haunt her dreams at night Dreams that darken all her light Why must i cut to feel alive Why cant i just take a final dive A dive into the dark abyss So that can be through with this Unanswered thought run through my brain These the things that keep sane But in the end you the clue No one can answer these questions but you Comments or anything else is greatlyappreciated. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComputerGuy Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 It's a good poem, very well written. I haven't been following your posts to know you're full story, but I can offer you this: Things will get better, you're alive for a reason, no matter how alone and unloved you feel, there are many people who would miss you if you were to go. It may seem like there is no way out but there is, and suicide isn't it. You've gotten this far, and based on your petry skills, your obviously talented, so I can guarantee one day you will be happy. Probably sooner than you think Hope you start to feel better soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gunther Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 interesting perhaps a little morbid, but pretty good. If I may ask is this actualy related to your life? It sounds like there is more behind this than meets the eye. You are a very articulate person. nice use of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Author Share Posted July 30, 2004 Yes this is about my life.All my poetry is based on a part of my life or a part of something that has happened to me.Its my inspiration. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Excellent. It's a very good poem. =D> Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Great poem, very very good. I wish I had talent like you. If you ever need to talk, feel free to pm me. Under Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 ironically when i our poem you seem to have a beauty within your words desite the context, it seems that you thrive for hope, and maybe a different background because i truly feel that you love life but not your own, does this make sense? almost as if had there been a different path for you, then this wouldnt have ever crossed your mind. probably a little obvious but i think you do want to live underneath the tears, kel p.s. great poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 31, 2004 Author Share Posted July 31, 2004 yes that does make sense.i wish i had a better life but unfortunately i dont. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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