dpressedone89 Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 the pain inside my heart makes the pain on my wrists look tame from an unloved little girl to a forgotten little boy the tears the blood its all the same through time you hope to someday heal the deep wounds you carve out of fears and memories of your life so full of tears the blood trickling from your arm makes life seem real these unresolved conflicts and hatred kept inside for years my eyes widen with joy as i find a razorblade one swift movement and its done happiness takes over but your pain still stayed to live through this is to cry out in vein to listen to the sound of your footsteps running from your pain the subtle razors last kiss lable me insane time of my wasted years filled with burnin pain its all over now one last razor i the vein as the blood trickles to the floor as your tears crash to the ground your silent screams paid for lack of sound but your happy no pain anymore just you limp on the floor a huddled bloody mound -sTiTcHeS havent written much lately ive been too down to actuall write but i cant keep it in anymore this probably sucked but tell me what you think anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 I'm glad you're still writing, and I really like the 1st stanza: through time you hope to someday heal the deep wounds you carve out of fears and memories of your life so full of tears the blood trickling from your arm makes life seem real these unresolved conflicts and hatred kept inside for years EmptySoul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 That was a wonderful poem and it was filled with emotion.Keep up the writing. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Good poem! Keep up the writing. I really enjoy your work. under Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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