i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 Why cant i have a normal life Why must i live by the knife The thing that causes me my pain Yet shows all i have to gain Why i ask do i cry Crimson tears fall from my sky I am young but grew up quick Depressed,troubled,take your pick For i am all of the above But all i yearn is someone's love Someone who would care for me But i have no one to set me free My tears are red and burn inside My enternal scars i can no longer hide I want them to see my pain Because this hurt overloads my brain A depressed teen who sits in dark Lifes cruel punishment has left its mark And as she fades and becomes yesterday Her soul is finally set free today I wrote this poem about my life.Dont judge plz. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul-From-Oz Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 You are years ahead of your age being able to express your feelings so clearly. I hope u find the person to replace the pain u feel necessary to absorb. Try to keep strong and whether u believe in a god or not, believe we each have a role to play in life and yours will become clearer in time. Keep writing - u have a great talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 its a good poem i like it alot. your really clear when you describe how you feel. you have a lot of talent, don't let anyone or anything stop you from writing.keep up the good work. stay strong -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaiva Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 You have a way with words and you use it for your advantage. I love the poem it has a lot of meaning and it shows your hurt. I hope that you can find someone who can make you at least understand what is going on and can help you find happiness. I'll be willing to help. Jaiva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Author Share Posted July 30, 2004 Thanx everyone.I wish i could find a place to put all my poetry though.I want it to be heard.If anyone knows where i can do this please tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Great poem. I've read a lot of your poems, and like other writters, you never cease to amaze me. It's really good. =D> Congratulations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Wonderful poem you expressed your feelings well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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