neva_black_n_white Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 Hey everyone, No real name, theres reasoning behind whats written but i dont feel like describing that yet, i hope someone can understand but sorry for those who can actually relate ? Have you ever been curious of what the world can see? Is there really a boundry situated between you and me? A desire to step over Why now break the rules? When lucks based on a four leaf clover And your standing in my shoes! Torn by dilusions Grasped by the truth What options does your mind convery Have you decided theres more to loose? Something simple seen by eye Is first a complexity of the mind Created by the Divince of ALL man kind Looking right through me, what is there to gain? Nothing but your own self portrait, subdued by pain But is this the reality of whats there? Or did the heart play its own story when you once again became scared? Your silence gains nothing Your conscience speaks on Your hearts screaming whats right So why've you gone for the wrong? What was it you lost or was is that you'd seen yourself gain? The questions now remain unanswered as you'll never see me again! -------------------------- Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 24, 2004 Author Share Posted July 24, 2004 I just wanted to leave the option for anyone to understand what is the reasoning behind my poem: link removed you dont have to look at this but it just shows why i wrote it. i guess i decided to say why. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 25, 2004 Share Posted July 25, 2004 Wonderful poem.Though i dont understand the full meaning i think i get the point.Keep writing Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 25, 2004 Author Share Posted July 25, 2004 Thankyou, and its ok, to be entirely honest despite me writing it i couldnt tell you the entirity of what it is that my poem means, but thankyou all the same, i appreciate what you had to say, well it put a smile on my face anyway, thankyou, kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boredguy Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 really amazin poem...this is one of those few poems that you read again and again and every time u get a different understanding. seems like ill be mulling over it now and then. really great! keep it up ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Hey Kel, OMG what a wonderful poem! I agree with BoredGuy that everytime I read it I get another understanding from it. Wow it is awesome and you should not stop writing. Good Job!!!! =D> Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 26, 2004 Author Share Posted July 26, 2004 that was a really nice comment boredguy thanks, it would be nice to know what some of you actually interperated from the poem, but dont feel obliged, thanks hubman also, i believe youve become a little fan of my art thanks everyone, it feels good for others to like my writing Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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