boredguy Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 darkness prevails? light still exists have some hope life is a twist happiness is glum sadness is merry dont take life in such a hurry stop n smile there is no dark just the absense of light there is no sad just the absense of happy to be, to see, the world around me is a gift i dont take lightly i wish; i hope i never let an oppurtunity pass me by for life is a journey where one cannot walk, one must fly! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 Nice poem keep writing I like your style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 Awesome poem.You have a way with words.Keep it up Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boredguy Posted July 24, 2004 Author Share Posted July 24, 2004 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 i liked your optomism, the use of contradictions to emphasise this made your poem all the more powerful, i enjoyed reading it and you seem to give a lot of hope in your words, thanks. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 I agree with Kel on this one. What a great way you used contradictions to make a point. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work! Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaiva Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 I like your poem. It is very optimistic, which is something that I'm trying hard to be. Mi amor is trying to get me to work on that. I love the poem, keep writing. Jaiva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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