ang3l2004 Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 I had fallen asleep and was thinking of you, We were sitting on a cloud the sky was blue. It started to become dark and we were sitting on a star, Mabe it is the one I wished on that you were not to far. We looked into eachothers eyes and just sat next to the moon, Becoming so close again I knew it was coming soon. I started to drop and slowly fall from the sky, I was falling all alone I began to cry. As I am looking up you are smiling from above, I started to fall faster,faster then I fell in love. I reached out for your hand as im falling and in tears, I begin to see our memories of our 2 years. You did not hold your hand out to save me from this fall, The bottom was coming soon and I tryed after all. As I hit the bottom I had no clue what to do, I was looking all around but did not see you. I felt so broken and hurt that I began to weep, Then I hear a knock at my door that woke me from my sleep. As I woke up and looked around to notice this was a dream, I realize that in life nothing is ever what it may seem. By tell me what you think ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boredguy Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 that was a truly beautiful poem. keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 All of your poetry is very meaningful.And this one was no diffwerent.Keep up the writing Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted July 24, 2004 Author Share Posted July 24, 2004 thankyou!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 thats a great poem, its kind of putting things into perspective and almost making you see what you have to ensure that that person is there for when you fall because a friendship or relationship could be so strong. but anyway, i enjoy reading you poem, it was really good. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 =D> WOW I loved it Ang3l!!! Your so talented with your poetry. Please keep up your writing because it is so good. Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted July 25, 2004 Author Share Posted July 25, 2004 Thankyou so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaiva Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 As I've said b4 I really like your poetry and its very insightful. Continue writing. Jaiva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted July 27, 2004 Author Share Posted July 27, 2004 thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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