dpressedone89 Posted July 16, 2004 Share Posted July 16, 2004 you hear me breathe so far from life you see me run away and hide I cut myself open and bleed until there is nothing left inside you can see my scars there still open, bleeding i enjoy the fear i put into your eyes wondering where all of these cuts are leading the light in my eyes has faded now a faint glimmer remains as that also fades to my death as im leaving the world things are still the same i feel the pain but it doesnt bother me anymore the faint burn from a razor the pulsating rush from the blood the gleaming edge of my savior it has saved me yet again this time it has for good there is nothing left no one who cared enough i was so misunderstood i am the past i have frogotten the pain my future has been erased all be one razor and two viens -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 16, 2004 Author Share Posted July 16, 2004 whoa whoa people i want to hear your oppinions but not all at once folks lol does anyone have an oppinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 18, 2004 Share Posted July 18, 2004 I have a reply.i loved your poem.All of your poetry is well written love Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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