tainted_soul Posted July 11, 2004 Share Posted July 11, 2004 i need more of... one thing, everything all my dreams, they don't mean what you want, what you got what it is, what it's not you take one thing i'll kill your dreams wait up, slow down i've hit, the ground come back, so long one more, i'm gone you take, my pain i'll pour, the rain some things, are left for your, best dress i keep, this by my side, i cry when you, don't speak i steal, heartbeats i can't, stop time one last, night drive birds dead, the air moon blows, your hair can't stop this from running on i've been gone for way too long can't stop time by standing still break from life i never will i can't stop time for you (i wish i could) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted July 11, 2004 Share Posted July 11, 2004 Its good, sounds like it could be a song Its cool... there is that dead birds and moon stanza that didn't quite fit... but I enjoyed the bounce of it. Kept me goin. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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