dpressedone89 Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 the pain has faded these wounds will heal itme after time i think you are to good to be real but you are no ghost you arent my imagination you've shown me real love you are no exageration i love you now and always have, always will no more tears will fall no more blood will spill just knowing you care lifts my spirits and lights my eyes i trust you as you trust me forever truth together with no lies you are my everything i dont know what to do my words fail me all i know is that i love you -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 That poem was wonderful.Do u mind if i ask who its about Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 9, 2004 Author Share Posted July 9, 2004 thanx i thought it was nice its the only one that i have written in the last month that wasnt extremly depressing anyway you can ask me who its about but ask me on AIM ok.im glad you liked it. any more oppinions -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted July 11, 2004 Share Posted July 11, 2004 I liked it too.. still needs work like all poems do I liked it alot. Good rhyme scheme goin. I liked the choice of words too. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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