ang3l2004 Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 In my heart in my mind im starting to feel trapped behind these walls, Alone in this dark place all by myself as the tear falls. I begin to think of the past and try to find where I stand. I start to wonder why im falling and where I am going to land. I feel alone and stuck hurt and pain sadness and im tender, So I am asking for an angel to come heal me please to the sender. I know that you must pass the storms with all of your might, I am sick of fighting these feelings I feel all I do is fight. I look around me open my eyes only to see, That this dark black wall is infront of me. I am crying inside I am reaching out for something to help out, I am screaming in the shadows of my everlasting doubt. I cant take this anymore everything has control, For my heart is broken the heart that you stole. Please I want to be happy I want to smile again. I want to be free of these walls more then every now and then. So please listen open your ears for you will hear all of my screams and feel my tears. by what did you think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 WOW>i am speechless.i really enjoyed that poem.BRAVO =D> keep writing u have a talent Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 OMG What an awesome poem!!!!!! =D> *Standing Ovation!* Gee Ang3l you have a talent and you should never give up your writing!!!! I loved that poem!!! Keep up the good work... Your friend, Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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