i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 This is yet another poem.I just want everyone to know that i am posting all this poetry b/c i want ppl to know how i feel.Especially if they can relate Numb Though i stand in front of you Clear as can be You look away Unnoticing me your numb The blood pours from my veins Spilling on the floor But you dont give it a glance You walk out the door Your numb i am leaving now No its not your fault Your vision must be blurred To not notice your life coming to a halt Your numb Crimson tears now drip from your wrist The numbness hides the pain After understanding the picture You go completely insane You are no longer numb You are dead inside I know this is not one of my best poems.But it really speaks the truth of how i feel. Comments questions suggestions Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
butterflykiss04 Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 Well I personally I cant relate and I cant appreciate these kinds of poems but I do like that you have found a way to express yourself and if it helps you than more power to you! God bless! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 I really enjoyed your poem. Keep up the great work!! Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 9, 2004 Author Share Posted July 9, 2004 If ne one wants to tlk about this pome or ne of my poems.Whether they meant ne thing to u relate to uor u like it go ahead and pm me. Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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