i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 This poem is written strait from the heart.It is alittle strong. Crimson Regrets Crimson Regrets Of things come and gone My mind is a blurr I've been numb for so long Pleasant memories Of a place in my mind When i was happy That was once upon a time My arm is like a battlefield Holding so much pain Of the blood that has dripped Leaving an eternal stain The blades are my friends There cuts a bloody kiss Leaving me sitting In a puddle of bliss Crimson Regrets Of my wasted youth I only have one wish For you to know the truth Any one who has comments or suggestions i would love to hear them Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 Hello there. I'm also love poetry and won some prices once for a poem I wrote. I'm 14 as well but this has nathing to do with your question, lets just get to the point. This is my first question: Who is Crimson Regrets? How far do you want to go with your poem? What are you traying to express by this poem to whom will this besaid? to an ex? to an audience? to the family? Those are things that you need to think when u write a poem and explan what were you thinking and felling when u wrote this poem. If you want to answer this question its good; if you want to send me a message to ask me or tell me something I will happely answer. Good luck 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 Wow... I really like that and I understood everything you were trying to get accross in a very clear matter... maybe its because I'm a cutter myself and know what you are feeling... but also you are an excellent writer. I could never write like that! Good Job! I'm always here for you because I care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 8, 2004 Author Share Posted July 8, 2004 Wow thnx.I am glad u liked the poem.Gauchori B4 i answer your questions i want to tell you something.All poetry has some mystry.You cant always explain the whiole message of a poem.You must let the reader figure it out.Thats why poetry is so intersting.So with that said i am not going to answer u wat crimson regrets are.If you read it enough you will undertsand.I will tell you that i have also one awrds with my poetry.As far as me wanting to go places with this poem,i will let it take me as far as i can go. Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaiva Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 I always like your poems. I love it when people write from the heart instead of trying to write on command. Jaiva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Author Share Posted July 30, 2004 Thanx jaiva.I like all your poetry also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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