i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 Beaten broken boy Beaten and broken He walked in school Knowing he would be teased And be called a fool If they only knew What pain he endured How bad he was hit Their vision was blurred The teasing continued Day In and day out So did the beatings Without a doubt But it had to stop The abuse was so bad And all of it came From the fist of his dad His mother was no where to help She left when it began She up and left her beaten son Packed her things and ran Slams and hits are familiar sounds As the night rolls on Sometimes he is beaten Until the break of dawn. The neighbors hear but speak no words They listen all night long His screams they haunt their nightmares Its almost like a scary song But after years of this sad song Someone speaks their mind That beaten boy now has a friend He's no longer left behind Beaten broken was his home Screams that filled the ears Of neighbors who sat and listened While drowning in their tears Teasing ceased at school each day For they all wish they had known Of the boy who screamed at night Inside his beaten broken home Comments and opinions are greatly appreciated Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 wow, that is exactly how i feel. its amazing you put my feelings into words i tried and you are right it did sound like a venting piece. your writing is very good and improving in everything you write good job and keep up the good work, -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 8, 2004 Author Share Posted July 8, 2004 Thanx dpressedone89.Your writing is really good to.I am glad that you could relate to my poem.I can always relate to your poetry. Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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