dpressedone89 Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 I hate you daddy we used to be so close together fast friends forever until the end that you chose you control my life every second since the start its for the best your a good parent you knew about my cutting yet you bought me a knife we had a friend ship you and i but your shallowness and alchohol turned you to something i despise you dont understand me at all not that im a depressed teenager not even that you dont get me i turn away and quiet down every time that you have hit me but im not afraid of you or anything anymore nothing left of me inside a puddle of blood and me huddled on the floor the fight inside has died as has the rest of me i wish you would either die or let me your dead in my eyes no longer a father not even a man but loser that i despise you used to be my hero now i hate you we used to play like other fathers and sons i hate you so much i will never be like you i dream of playing with knives and guns i hate you daddy im not you friend and im not your son -sTiTcHeS oppinions? anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 That poem was obviously written with alot of emotrion.Though it is a good poem it seems more like a venting piece of writing.Either way it was extraordinary =D> Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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