i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 Hey guys i am back again with another poem.I hope you guys like this one.Please if you dont like it dont reply.K? Its over My trust is something you have lost Along with my love The only person who cares about me Is the big man above You make my life a living hell With your hits and your screams The only place I can escape Is in the sanity of my dreams But I am making a stand Stopping your pain I have nothing to lose And all to gain This is the last time mother You will lay a hand on me no more Go ahead and scream As I walk out that door I don't know where I'm headed Or who I will meet But I am leaving your hell On my own two feet Hope u like.Any comments r greatly appreciated Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyStuFF129 Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 wow..that is very deep..and i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 i love it! it is good, its deep and well written.it has some strong feelings in there and im glad that you can write about things without worry.you are such a great writer keep it up. -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 7, 2004 Share Posted July 7, 2004 WOW What a really deep poem. *applause* I loved it keep up the great writing!!!! Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 7, 2004 Author Share Posted July 7, 2004 Thanx guys.I was kind of hesitant to write this poem b/c my last poem got heavey criticism.I just want everybody to know that just b/c my writing is strong doesnt mean i am troubled psycho or ne thing else.Tru most of my poems are written from experience.So i just want to thank you all for commenting Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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