Drowning in the Sea

[Beoslasher]

You chain me to a word

Begins with L and ends with E

A chain that wraps around my feet

and cast me in the sea

 

Falling deep beneath

into blueish green

and I

I spot the undergrowth of fears

of many years of waste

 

The litter of love

that tangles in my toes and constricts my feet

the simple message, a shipwrecks song

warns me of drowning deep

 

And I begin to struggle, have I gone too deep to leave?

I love to love, and hate this life

a lie, a fake, stuck in place

so deep, so deep, I descend

 

The green turns to blue

The blue turns to black

the black turns into white

as I begin to die

as I begin to die

 

My last thoughts as I can't breathe

are more of a dream where

 

I walk the sands

and explore the lands

and fruits of other trees

 

I my wiggle toes inside the sand

and look behind and see

the sun smiling down at me

 

and then I go to sleep

a soft eternal sleep

drowning in the sea

[ToF]

Legitimately great, in my opinion. The flow is a little bit inconsistent though, which you may or may not have been going for.

 

But it's whimsical, and I am a sucker for a little whimsy